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Captured WIP 3 by ~Anyassa:iconAnyassa:

Categories Digital Art > Paintings & Airbrushing > Fantasy

©2007-2009 ~Anyassa
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Another WIP.

When opening this file in photoshop today, I realized how far I have come since I started drawing. I wrote my thoughts on this down in my journal on ~Shiaine.
I thought it was worth making a WIP of this again.

Any help or critique is welcome. Actually, it's the reason I keep posting these WIPs. v__v;;

31 hours so far.

Faeren and the Forest of Illusions are © to Adele Lorienne.
This drawing is © to me.

Adele, I was wondering, do lirewens live in this forest? ^_^

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~Aislin-Sedai Sep 23, 2007, 4:35:28 AM
Z'n haar is heel gaaf, en z'n lippen ook ^^

1 dingetje kritiek: Ik weet niet precies hoe het komt, maar op een of andere manier is het gedeelte waar zijn kaak op zijn nek zit zeg maar een beetje vaag. Net alsof het hoofd er los opstaat in plaats van er aan vast zit... hm weet echt niet wat het is maar z'n nek lijkt gewoon een beetje vreemd.
Maar dat is echt het enige minpuntje wat ik zie ^^ verder vind ik hem nog steeds geweldig!

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~Aleid Sep 23, 2007, 4:38:38 AM
Ok, ik ga gewoon alleen maar negatieve dingen zeggen want de rest zeg ik wel als hij af is XD
De mond klopt niet. Te breed denk ik..
Het donkere stuk tussen neus en wang ook niet. Ook te breed denk ik XD
De schaduw onder zijn neus ook niet XD Dat ene ding dat naar zn mond loopt. Ik zie nu hoe je dat bedoelt, en het klopt niet, je hebt de mond te ver naar binnen gedraaid. XD
Eh, ik vind het dus wél mooi he, dat je dat even weet ;)

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`Saimain Sep 24, 2007, 1:05:44 PM
Woot, that is looking so awesome! If you're still open to critique, his head seems just a little too large for the rest of his body, I think. If you've painted it on a separate layer, you can just copy/paste that layer into another file and resize it a bit smaller, then paste it back in and delete the old layer. If you're using Photoshop, there is also a "scale" option somewhere that would allow you to resize individual layers, too.
And yes, Lirewens could be in the forest if you like. :)

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=Shiaine Sep 25, 2007, 10:09:28 AM
As long as I am working on a drawing, I am always open to critique :)

Yeah you may be right... It's just a little, though. A human body is generally seven heads... which this is. It might be that the torso is too small in comparison to the head and the legs, though.
Thank you, anyway, for making me aware of this ^_^ I will work on it.
And yes, I do use Photoshop.

Thank you for the comment ^__^

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=tsemalon Sep 26, 2007, 1:57:35 AM
you know what i like most about it? the idea ^^

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=Shiaine Sep 26, 2007, 4:33:47 AM
Lol ^^ Thanks.

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=Shiaine Sep 26, 2007, 4:38:16 AM
xD Though I am wondering why I bothered with the 50 hours of work when it was the IDEA that is best appreciated, haha xD I could've conveyed the idea with 2 hours of work as well :P

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=tsemalon Sep 26, 2007, 7:41:44 AM
jep, nutteloos comment, ik weet het

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